The Hidden Crow

I don't know if my review would matter as I only enjoy reading books and not often review them so yeah despite what that I say in my opinion It's  decent enough which I enjoyed reading although the first 4 to 10 chapters were kinda annoying as there were lack of dialogues but it got better as it went on, characters are likeable,story pace is also good although there certain things I think you can improve like regarding the missing explanation of certain things like for example in case of system world quest there wasn't any mention of time limit or such, less appearance of status window which shows their progress(which confused me sometimes regarding their progress made by them).Overall I think the story I have read so far is good and keep up the good work as in the latest chapter I have read till now cleared  many of doubts and you are definitely improving so keep going forward and I hope you don't drop this book.(Also although the background is already set for MC and FMC world but honestly I think giving One Year for each calamity is short as it gets more dangerous for them later on and also I recommend creating a chapter 0 or something for showing the power of MCs and the fantasy world and also ranking of system,etc)

A good book with interesting plot. Author has a way of making us visualize the fighting scenes. Looking up for more chapters.

Only the format makes it unreadable but the story is gud. I have read 5 chapters if you can fix the format i will surely read all the chapters amd support you.🖤🖤

<p>The shaking of Yuan's tiny frame told him that his son understood that he did something bad and was crying based on the moisture he started to feel on his chest. He wasn't through with his lecture, however. The inexperienced father was about to open his mouth to deliver his rebuke when his son lifted his face to stare up at him, his eyes brimming with fat tears as his lips trembled.</p>

ummm

"That's a weird reason" I said trying to laugh but I can't.

Gongzi Yu berkata, "Kamu punya satu hal lagi."

Light damage (Vampire 10%): {passive} You do not like light.